lunes, 15 de diciembre de 2014

an unexpected thing

Chapter 9-12


Jonas our protagonist has just received an assignment to be receiver, he do not know what that is but he know that he will train apart and he cannot tell what happened in his day of work. 

His friend Asher is very proud, well most are very proud but some think that it is not right. His father told him that the elders has chosen someone before, but it fail. Jonas it is now waiting for his first day as receiver of memory. Jonas has just arrived with Jonas to work, she tell him that if they finish at the same time she will arrive with him. Jonas has just arrived to work and he sees a desk with a person. The person that was in the desk had told him “welcome, receiver of memory”. She opens a door on the left side. 




When Jonas was waiting he saw a man, Jonas know that he has seeing him sometime.  He was the elder that had seemed separate from the others at the ceremony. The elder have been a long time receiver so he knows what he is doing. The elder has told him that he was selected just like him. He explained all to Jonas so he knows that to be receiver of memory is really hard. The Old man takes Jonas to a room so he could show him something. The elder has make Jonas fill snow. Jonas didn’t think that he could fill that, he thanked that he was still sleeper. When he wakes up he fill like if he didn’t move, he was very surprise. Jonas told the man to show all there power. The elder correct him, I do not have power, I have honor. Jonas has understood a lot in his training. He wanted to ask him a question, ¿what is your name? The elder moved his shoulder and said “you may call me The Giver”. His mom came and asking “you slept suddenly, Jonas” Jonas wasn’t prepared to tell a lie but he wasn’t even preparing to tell the truth. Jonas wanted to school but he felt something different. All classes were the same. He wasn’t preparing to tell his friends what he fills in the annex room. How could you tell something that someone has never seen or felt? At the end of school Fiona was waiting for him to go back together. Jonas went again to the training, Jonas told the man that he saw something deferent in her friend Fiona, her hair was different but not in shape or length. He didn’t know how to tell him. Finally he said “it changed. I don’t know how or why”. The elder to start the training he told Jonas if he had remember when he was seven or five. Jonas told him that he could remember. The elder told him well you will be able to go back farther. Try. Just concentrate.  Jonas closed his eyes, he felt the sled and hill and the snow. Suddenly he saw something changing like the apple or Fiona’s hair. Jonas waked up; the elder was looking him curiously. He tried again; the giver told him had you see the color red? That means that he could see beyond. He will gain more wisdom and more colors. Jonas asks him how he felt when he was at first a receiver. He told him another day, another day I will tell you. 

1 comentario:

  1. Sebastian, I like the quote you used because it tells a lot about Jonas in a little amount of words. I would of add some images and organize the structure better because it looks to simple.

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